Oct 07 2006, 7:57 pm - By Cillabillerzz

As I crawl in the black empty hole,I only see darkness and hear nothing but the lies of my world.The tunnel goes on forever,twelve years I have run through it trying to find a way out. Whats this?,I see a light,Oh how joyful I feel to see light after all of these years of darkness.I run to it,running,running screaming,screaming.The light starts to fade away,I cry out "Im sorry,please forgive me!"Running after it still I cry out again "Come back!Please dont go!"I suddenly feel something in the way,I start to scream "Go away!Im done,leave me alone!".The feeling of something blocking my way suddenly fades away and the light starts to return.I run forward after it,and before I can touch the light......A dove flys by my head and lands on my shoulder whispering into my ear "My child you have run so far to reach me,when all you had to do is call on my name and I would have come to you."I fall to the ground crying,"Lord is this it for me?""No my child it is just the beginning."........I start to wipe away the tears,and when the last of my tears sheds and falls to the ground,I look up to see that I am out of the darkness and in a bright and joyful place. I turn and see the king looking at me I start to yell "I see the King I see the King",Joy starts to rise up inside me as he walks my way,"May I have this dance my princess?""Princess?"I ask,I look down to see me wearing this beautiful gold gown with a sparkling crown on my head.I start to dance with my King as he whispers in my ear "I love you my child and now you are free." By: Priscilla Danielle Quesada' (heres another one i did its called The Man I Love) The man I love makes me so happy,He took away my pain,He took away my weakness,He gave me strength,He gave me a reason to live on this earth,without him I would be nothing.With him I am everything. This is to the man whom I love Jesus Christ,for he is the one and only man who will always love you no matter what.He'll never leave your side,He's always there when you need him and even though you cant see him you'll always feel a slight pressure on the palm of your hand and see a small kiss mark on your forhead. (hope u like them)

Oct 07 2006, 8:03 pm - Replied by: otmerhorn

Thank you ... God bless ... Bro. Ott

Oct 08 2006, 6:08 am - Replied by: ruthie39

Thank you so much for sharing you talent. The first one made me cry. They are both beautiful poems.

Oct 11 2006, 4:27 am - Replied by: saya

thnx 4 sharin that with us.....
u r very talented....

Oct 14 2006, 10:52 pm - Replied by: Cillabillerzz

thanks

Oct 29 2006, 5:04 pm - Replied by: officer_of_christ

Those were amazing!!!! You have talent, and I can tell you write with your feelings. I could since a lot of emotions in the first one a lot of fear then happiness, job well done.

 

~*~Rach~*~