Hi Everyone,
So... like over Eater as I was praying I was blessed with a couple of ideas that I put together in a song. The only problem is, uh, I'm not a very good singer. But here's the Lyrics and the song's listed on the player on my page.
Enjoy!!
Alex
Song Title: The Greatest Gift of Love
Author(s): Me - Alex
(C) 2007 -
Verse 1
The Greatest Gift of Love came down to show me how to live, and teach me how he so loves each and every one.
The Greatest Gift of Love rode in to save me from my sin, amidst the cheers and waves of all the joyful crowd.
Bridge
But Jesus something happened as your love reached out to me.
The venom of my sin struck(maybe stung) back and brought you misery.
(NOTE: use mathcing adjectives - originally I had
'weight of all my sin struck back - a heavy weight doesn't 'strike')
Verse 2
The Greatest Gift of Love hung dying there upon a cross, (as) every precious drop of blood kept reaching out.
Forsaken and alone in darkness saving all the world, as every precious drop of blood kept reaching out.
Bridge
But when you said "It's finished" Jesus that was just the start.
Your loved reached through my darkest sin and right into my heart.
Verse 3
The Greatest Gift of Love arose and all around the earth, creation shouted that it's King's alive again. (a bit awkward wording here)
Now everyone can know the beauty of his majesty. (Free Space)
Surrender to the Greatest Gift of Love.